Audience Feedback 2: From Rough Cut 6

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK FROM ROUGH CUT 6
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What the people giving feedback said was that:
1. The first scene is somewhat confusing first time watching it.
2. That the sound throughout the film opening is achieving some verisimilitude but not a lot, because the continuity for the sound is not good.
3. The sound should be worked on. Stretch the sound out instead of having it loud in some places.
4. That the sound in the first scene is rather loud/too loud.
5. A reorder of some shots in the rape chase scene or taking some shots out of it.
5. That there should be an extra shot in the first scene of one of the rapist's hands grabbing the girl's shoulder to show that the rapists have caught up to her, also this gives more of a scare and emphasis on the rapists catching up with her.
7. Don't take away the sound away from the place where there is shots of Alex in the lair.

What was good:
1. I did a good job with more realistic breathing and gasping 
2. The title sequence at the end was very good with the sounds of blood being spilled, nice effects of titles.
3. I chose a better font for the second ident (you can see it more clearly with the red).

Target Audience
Everyone thought the target audience would be age 18-24 and this is not the target audience I had in mind, I had in mind age 15-24. The reason why I think it is a 15 and not an 18 is because you never actually see anything graphically disturbing, because the scene cuts away before you can see anything graphic happening. E.g at the end of the rape chase scene you don't actually see the girl get raped. Also, at the end of the film opening, you don't actually see Alex getting stabbed with blood coming out.